Throughout video, where there are black bars on the side, get rid of these.
Need title slide. Background of slide should be TCNJ blue (RGB = 41 – 63 – 111) with white text over top. Text should read: Stay Connected
Support Our Future
First archival photo of Ed (about 8 seconds into the video) needs to go by quicker. Start the image up a little higher, and speed up the zoom so the photo is only on screen for 3 seconds. Add the extra second to the slide that comes right after this picture
The zooming out on Ed’s retirement photo that happens at about 30 seconds into the video is too fast. Slow this down (but that slide should NOT be on screen for any longer than it currently is)
Caption for Prat Vyas should read: Prat Vyas Class of 2007
Footage of New York City should be shown while Prat is talking about working in NYC (Prat will be doing a voiceover). So you’ll have to delete the footage of Prat talking about working NYC, and use just the audio while showing the NYC street scenes.
About 3/5 of the way through, while John is talking about endowments, there is a series of five slides show. Change them in this way: * make the library interior photo the first shot * then show the African American girl * then show this photo: http://www.tcnj.edu/~webtest2/givingvideo/newcampus/IMG_1440.jpg * then show the science professor working with the two students, but fix this so that you actually see the professor’s face * then show the outside show of students sitting outside the library * NOTE: the football shot will come out of this spot, but be used at the end.
During montage at end, shorten the aerial shots to 3 seconds each, cut one second from the group photo of the African American alums, and insert the football shot (3 seconds for this shot).
Fix the sound of John’s voice over so it’s not so tinny
The end should fade to a blue screen with the VERTICAL college logo (which can be downloaded from here: http://www.tcnj.edu/~ccr/sg/downloadable_logos_print.html )
Under the logo, have this URL in white type:
www.tcnj.edu/give
Sound:
John needs to sound more like the rest Ed is too low Prat is too loud
New Production Notes - 12/6/07
:00 - :04 -- Show Ed talking
:04 - :08 -- archival picture of freshman registration
:08 - :12 -- archival picture of Ed by himself
:12 - :16 -- archival picture of bus stop, zooming out from the sign that reads "New Jersey State Teachers College"
:16 - :21 -- archival classroom photo
:21 - :37 -- this will be cut, but don't cut it until the end because that will mess up the timeline notes to follow.
:37 - :41 -- pick up where Ed says "I graduated .... " -- use an archival commencement photo (from here: http://www.tcnj.edu/~webtest2/givingvideo/campus50s/004_4.JPG )
: 41 - :45 -- use archival class photo (file: http://www.tcnj.edu/~webtest2/givingvideo/ed/1949-1.jpg )
:45 - :50 -- Ed footage from camera 1
:50 - :56 -- Ed retirement photo -- pull photo from page 1 of the newsletter at this website: www.njefa.com/pdf/NJEFA%20NEWS%204.07%20final.pdf
I'm thinking that you can make a graphic from page 1 of the PDF file, and start in close on the photo of Ed, pulling back to show the headline and the newsletter's masthead. Call me if this is confusing.
use in any order you want. each photo should get at least 4 seconds on screen
3:35 - 3:42 -- cut back to John video
3:42 - 3:51 -- this footage should be cut after all edits are made
3:53 - 3:56 -- Ed video as is
3:57 - 4:11 -- B-roll: use picture: http://www.tcnj.edu/~webtest2/givingvideo/ed/1950-1.jpg
use b-roll of ed's Hall of Fame plaque
use photo: http://www.tcnj.edu/~webtest2/givingvideo/ed/New%20Ed%20photos/Ed-at-Homecoming-2007.jpg
4:12 - 4:26 -- use video as is
4:27 - 4:34 -- use John video
4:34 - 4:44 -- this gets cut out and replaced with the new audio file that I sent to Alfonso on 12/6. It's a WAV file that needs to be cleaned up a bit. You'll need to isolate from :02 seconds in (you're cutting out my voice at the beginning where I say "okay go." You'll need from :02 through :21 seconds. Use that audio as a voiceover, and use the following photos as B-roll during it:
4:44 - 4:51 -- use this video as is as the end of the movie
Next Meeting
Alfonso, Winkel, and Tony
Monday , Dec. 10 @ 1pm in Green 217
Time line 1st Draft for Development Office Review: 12/6 (Thursday Morning) 2nd Draft for Development Office Review: 12/10 (Monday Morning) Launch Video: 12/12 (Wednesday Morning
Campus Shots from 50s: http://www.tcnj.edu/~webtest2/givingvideo/campus50s/ Photos of Ed: http://www.tcnj.edu/~webtest2/givingvideo/ed/ Photos of Prat: Photos of Ed & Prat:
Lessons Learned
Practice interviewing.
Ask talent to speak in short to the point sentences.
Scan full resolution video to DVD so Tony can organize clips with iMovie.
Pre-producation meeting should include themes, messages, shots
